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Still Holding Strong







The rickety bridge holds steady 
underneath his bare dusky feet. 
Un-sturdy but still fastened,    
the darkling waters do waver. 
He prays, then crosses over.


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Tonye George

Date: 7/20/2024 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations dear Rosey. Cheers.

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 10:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win Vie, Very nicely penned

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/19/2024 4:05:00 AM

Thank you Joseph for running the contest, grateful for my placement.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day writing away..................

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/19/2024 4:05:00 AM

Thank you dear Paula

Tonye George

Date: 7/16/2024 10:27:00 PM

We should always find a way around every issue or stagnation. A bridge was built so it can be destroyed. But the ones we create by ourselves, they stay.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/19/2024 4:05:00 AM

May your bridges be strong Tonye, thanks for the comment.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/16/2024 10:06:00 AM

Nicely penned.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2024 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Jay for visiting my page, keep well :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/16/2024 8:44:00 AM

Dear Rose, I think you have expressed determination and purpose in ways that are encouraging. Life is full of potential dangers and unknown futures. We need that deep down courage to persevere. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2024 2:07:00 PM

If we keep Hope alive and we pray fervently, the burden is often lighter and our feet are more steady when we cross that fragile bridge. Thanks for reading Daniel