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Still Holding Strong







The rickety bridge holds steady 
underneath his bare dusky feet. 
Un-sturdy but still fastened,    
the darkling waters do waver. 
He prays, then crosses over.


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Tonye George

July 20, 2024 at 3:18 PM

Congratulations dear Rosey. Cheers.

Joseph May

July 18, 2024 at 10:36 AM

Congrats on your win Vie, Very nicely penned

Mystic Rose Rose

July 19, 2024 at 4:05 AM

Thank you Joseph for running the contest, grateful for my placement.

Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2024 at 9:09 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day writing away..................

Mystic Rose Rose

July 19, 2024 at 4:05 AM

Thank you dear Paula

Tonye George

July 16, 2024 at 10:27 PM

We should always find a way around every issue or stagnation. A bridge was built so it can be destroyed. But the ones we create by ourselves, they stay.

Mystic Rose Rose

July 19, 2024 at 4:05 AM

May your bridges be strong Tonye, thanks for the comment.

Jay Narain

July 16, 2024 at 10:06 AM

Nicely penned.

Mystic Rose Rose

July 16, 2024 at 2:08 PM

Thank you Jay for visiting my page, keep well :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 16, 2024 at 8:44 AM

Dear Rose, I think you have expressed determination and purpose in ways that are encouraging. Life is full of potential dangers and unknown futures. We need that deep down courage to persevere. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

July 16, 2024 at 2:07 PM

If we keep Hope alive and we pray fervently, the burden is often lighter and our feet are more steady when we cross that fragile bridge. Thanks for reading Daniel