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Still Holding On

its been 8 months since they took you away my love for you will never go away i parish my soul for your sweet angel girl you are blessed mama is fighting everyday only you saw my heart from the inside as my body grew yours whats ment to be will find its way to hear you say mama, for you to give me a hug im excited for the day i can see you baby girl my soul will always love you our hearts beat the same , no one can ever take your mama away or my baby girl i miss you dearly . sad how we are done this way i know you miss me in time god will deliver you back no one will ever kno the love between a mother and daughter i will always stand beside you sweeet jasmine my flower god threw to me to keep it growing on the grapevine. never forgotton baby girl we love you . i will catch when you are lost just look you will find me ,, our song time after time . im only a heart beat away my dear in time love is faith .no one can take that away .

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Date: 11/29/2018 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem Girl. ?
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 11/29/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/9/2018 12:05:00 PM
The numbness will always be there but time will make the memories stay beautiful
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 11/29/2018 10:05:00 PM
Mind forgets heart will always beat
Date: 11/27/2017 11:42:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem. This was so sad and it left me wordless, only one word is enough to describe it, which is simply " beautiful "
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Date: 11/27/2017 8:34:00 AM
This is so sad.. sorry about your loss...
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Date: 11/27/2017 8:10:00 AM
nice poem the words are fluent and sharp its my opinion that you should learn to use proper punchuation
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