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Still Fuming

Still fuming! A traffic incident made me distraught
Blinker on, from nowhere cut off by a chickie, no thought 
Checked mirrors, totally clear
Out from behind, she appeared
STILL FUMING as I write this, whatta a stupid little snot

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Lim'Rik Flats

September 27, 2017 at 9:00 AM

I am all for driverless cars//put some people in 'em, some behind bars!//I drive slow as a toad//get me offa the road!//(busy watching Dances with Stars) FUME ON TEAPOT JACK!!!

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2017 at 9:56 AM

One of my favourite shows between cop shows which Cathie and son Scott watch religiously! Yuk! STILL FUMING!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 27, 2017 at 8:40 AM

A feel for you giggle! So well acquainted with the magnitude of absent minded blinded drivers out there; biking as long as I did got a feel for riding traffic like rapids. Now of course I paddle along the shore in my big boat :) (sht, a poem may be there) Top of the morning to you Jack! xomo

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2017 at 9:51 AM

I can just imagine what it was like!!! You were a brave soul... happily you made it through! Huggsies! xxx

Silent One

September 27, 2017 at 6:50 AM

Ha! Still driving at your age? :)

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Absolutely!!! Haven't lost a thing... now the left turn signal is for turning left... right??? Just a wee bit confused! GOOD MORNING SO!!!

Russell Sivey

September 27, 2017 at 6:49 AM

check out my dog poop of a limerick my friend!

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM

Certainly will....

Russell Sivey

September 27, 2017 at 6:25 AM

She probably was a teenager just learning to drive, they get into a hurry spell and don't pay any attention to what's around them! What a brilliant poem, such a tremendous piece this morning! Great Work my friend!!

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2017 at 6:28 AM

Maybe so... hope she may it to adulthood driving like that!!! Totally unacceptable behaviour on the road!!!