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Still Flying

The day I chose you Compared to all the others I saw the uniqueness of your colors Looking back when you flew away Broke my heart in pieces and stole all peace in living When you were found my heart raced fast I was beyond grateful that you came back We moved forward and life was good Until one day when you seemed strange I saw you bleeding out in pain Then news struck that you were sick and surgery would bring an unknown risk The vet said there was a slim chance Like the usual medical script Uncertain and scared I couldn't bare To hear the panting from your chest All from too big an egg You couldn’t lay in your nest Your appetite was lost and I was at a loss I cupped you in my hands Warm and unharmed You were like snow melting away Drifting from my heart A change of season There was a reason For this lesson to be learned You held on for the holidays to make our last memories When the day of your dying came It sure left me crying But I know that you are...still flying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/4/2016 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Mango... For the kind reply... I'm looking forward in Reading a new one from you... hugs... Linda
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Date: 3/3/2016 11:33:00 PM
Mango,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/3/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for introducing yourself :) I will defiantly check out your work! (and don't put yourself down like that. I am SURE that you have some great skills!!

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