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Still Floating

If the earth started falling through space With nothing in its way Would it ever reach the bottom? How long would it take? Is there even a bottom? Sometimes I feel like I’m just floating through life Hanging there in space Wondering when I’ll fall When I’ll hit the bottom Is there even a bottom?

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Leotis Hargrove

Date: 10/15/2022 3:53:00 PM

Excellent poem, questions, and you left the conclusion for however read it to decide. Thank you for sharing! Keep up the great work of art!

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/4/2022 4:14:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this, making me reflect with thoughtfulness. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.