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The thinness of skin parchments across blue veins and brittle stick bones dreaming of budding branches—it lays loose you've matched my desire with phrases of burning leaves flames—flaring gold, yellow and red rheum fills my once clear eyes but echoed memory guides me through forests of fall descending with feathered down from empty nests dulled and lifeless fodder for fire ungathered leafless— forlorn as stalks of dry corn still, I eye beauty— voice symphonies of words and build bonfires from each passing night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/21/2015 11:43:00 AM
Fire makes such a good simile. You have done a great job with it too.
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Date: 1/20/2015 5:14:00 PM
It is always refreshing to read your work.
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:55:00 PM
Fire is so cleansing; it must destroy to renew; an excellent pen.
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:50:00 AM
beauty in sadness adorned with beautiful colors. A nice creation, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/18/2015 8:49:00 PM
As Connie said, your poetry is definitely original and so creative and brilliant, dear Debbie! Kudos! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:18:00 PM
Despite everything the fire still burns...a show of positivity that only faith and peace of heart can transmit. Excellent poem with strength of character! #7+++ All the best. // paul
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:00:00 PM
Debbie, I love how your poetry is always so original. This is another brilliant poem meant to linger long where the longitude and latitude meet in the mind.#7 I am fav'ing it too.
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:31:00 AM
forgot the rating! 7
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:30:00 AM
I love this poem . . . smoke from many fires fill my imagination . . . . but the fires still burn . . . giving hope and warmth to brave fading souls. Your poems are filled with much food that it takes time for me to digest all of its meaning. One reading is never enough . . . and I still see the words dance -- giving me another view. Lovely dear Debbie, 7 fav
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