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"still Beautiful"

We are so consumed with news of war and death..
Our minds and soul covered with terror I bet..
A simple picture of child playing ball, 
or couple walking in love I can recall..
Helping an older women carry her bags up the stairs, 
or a young man on a date holding out a chair..
On the train, giving up your seat for a lady, 
or a young mom and daughter with her hair being braided..
On to the park as a father and son have a first catch,
or elderly couple sitting together as their smiles match..
Well I hope these things remind us of how beautiful we can be,
just a simple act of kindness can bring a smile you see..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Michael. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Congrats Michael on your HM in Nathan's contest with this wonderful write on the theme.. now enjoy another honor for your creativity as well as a victory dance too... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 18, 2010 at 7:49 AM
A very beautiful poem with the wonders of small things like thanks and kindness, which always makes our life journey smoother. Thanks for diverting your attention on these lovely things. Love and best wishes. .....Ravindra .......Michael J Falotico.
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:33 AM
This is a reminder that by looking around...there is beauty in the simple, loving things around us. A wonderful poem, Michael.
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May 18, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Simple human kindnesses help us to see the beauty that still exists in our world, Michael. Been trying to write for this contest and these are the same thoughts I had. Wishing you success with this uplifting write! Love, Carolyn
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