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Still

Still I dream of you and I, within my mind at night And I Still want you in my arms, embrace you ever tight Your eyes lay deep within my heart, they Still have their effect I Still remember your lovely face, your beauty I can’t forget I find it hard to let you go, so Still my heart holds on And Still my heart will be with you, until all things are gone I realize Still I can’t deny, I do and always will Have care for you, deep in my heart, I love you ever Still Written Circa 2013 in Kabul, Afghanistan

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Date: 12/6/2016 9:24:00 PM
A truly beautiful and tender poem, MC. I love the rhyme, rhythm and smooth flow of the lines!
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:58:00 AM
Terrible sorry for my late reply! Thank you so very much for reading and commenting Kelly! MC
Date: 10/10/2016 5:22:00 PM
Lovely poem to someone you cared for very much. Good read.
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:43:00 PM
Yes Ma'am, some old feelings poured out onto the page...maybe one day she'll see it, read it, and know it was for her ;^) Thanks a bunch for stopping by! MC
Date: 10/8/2016 1:33:00 PM
Truly lovely, affectionate and romantic couplets, Marquis! Much enjoyed:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Paul for reading and commenting. This was quite enjoyable to write. MC
Date: 10/8/2016 10:21:00 AM
The yearning is palpable. Still says so much...
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Date: 10/8/2016 11:15:00 AM
Gosh, thanks so much! I enjoyed writing this one. The inspiration I had was overwhelming. Really appreciate you stopping in today. MC
Date: 10/7/2016 10:25:00 PM
Your words have painted a picture in my mind of the the longing, the pining that lies within your heart for this one true love; Still. Very well done Marquis
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Don, I appreciate you stopping by and checking out this poem. Your comment has been a bright spot in my day my friend...thank you again. MC
Date: 10/6/2016 10:39:00 PM
oh my...what an awesome poem. I've written one...I think with the same title. That ending couplet is gold.
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Date: 10/7/2016 12:24:00 AM
Hey I'd love to read it someday...God you have so many poems over there! LOL! It will take me some time to get through all of them. I'm very glad you enjoyed this one. MC
Date: 7/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
Your lover must be a lucky one;)
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:00:00 AM
Awww, you're sweet... No these were words written for someone long ago... But thank you for reading and commenting. Read more if you like! MC