Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Poet Rhyme

Still

Still I dream of you and I,
within my mind at night

And I Still want you in my arms,
embrace you ever tight

Your eyes lay deep within my heart,
they Still have their effect

I Still remember your lovely face,
your beauty I can’t forget

I find it hard to let you go,
so Still my heart holds on

And Still my heart  will be with you,
until all things are gone

I realize Still I can’t deny,
I do and always will

Have care for you, deep in my heart,
I love you ever Still













Written Circa 2013 in Kabul, Afghanistan

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Kelly Deschler December 6, 2016 at 9:24 PM A truly beautiful and tender poem, MC. I love the rhyme, rhythm and smooth flow of the lines! Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper May 13, 2018 at 12:58 AM Terrible sorry for my late reply! Thank you so very much for reading and commenting Kelly! MC

Janis Medders Tobechi October 10, 2016 at 5:22 PM Lovely poem to someone you cared for very much. Good read. Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 10, 2016 at 10:43 PM Yes Ma'am, some old feelings poured out onto the page...maybe one day she'll see it, read it, and know it was for her ;^) Thanks a bunch for stopping by! MC

Paul Callus October 8, 2016 at 1:33 PM Truly lovely, affectionate and romantic couplets, Marquis! Much enjoyed:) Regards // paul Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 10, 2016 at 10:42 PM Thanks Paul for reading and commenting. This was quite enjoyable to write. MC

Paloma P October 8, 2016 at 10:21 AM The yearning is palpable. Still says so much... Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 8, 2016 at 11:15 AM Gosh, thanks so much! I enjoyed writing this one. The inspiration I had was overwhelming. Really appreciate you stopping in today. MC

Donald J Bennett October 7, 2016 at 10:25 PM Your words have painted a picture in my mind of the the longing, the pining that lies within your heart for this one true love; Still. Very well done Marquis Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 7, 2016 at 10:55 PM Thanks Don, I appreciate you stopping by and checking out this poem. Your comment has been a bright spot in my day my friend...thank you again. MC

Eileen Manassian October 6, 2016 at 10:39 PM oh my...what an awesome poem. I've written one...I think with the same title. That ending couplet is gold. Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 7, 2016 at 12:24 AM Hey I'd love to read it someday...God you have so many poems over there! LOL! It will take me some time to get through all of them. I'm very glad you enjoyed this one. MC

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 14, 2016 at 8:45 AM Your lover must be a lucky one;) Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 15, 2016 at 11:00 AM Awww, you're sweet... No these were words written for someone long ago... But thank you for reading and commenting. Read more if you like! MC