Still

wondering what will come to be

      the tumultous thoughts

    inside of me
  
 searching for some inner peace

   just sit back relax, relate

         release

hopeimaginationinspirationalintrospectionliferhyme

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Adam Piper

September 6, 2008 at 9:31 PM

i love this!

Des Juan Richardson

August 31, 2008 at 9:55 PM

I can truly relate to this piece D-Nyce. The thoughts are the most exhausting. When we do take the time to relax, relate and release, we find the problems and issues were not as big as we perceived them. Amazing write again! ~Des Juan

Patricia Langston-Moran

August 30, 2008 at 7:51 PM

Again...thank you. Your poetry is very soothing and you show great compassion and understanding of the human spirit. I guess we poets do that, don't we? Nice poem "Still." Patricia

Adell Foster

August 28, 2008 at 6:39 PM

Hi D-nyce, your thoughts are very clearly conveyed throughout the lines of this lovely write... I am a strong believer in the sit back relax, relate and release method of reclaiming ones inner peace... Great writing my friend, thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Sharon Winter

August 26, 2008 at 7:45 PM

So simple. Such an excellent idea. Sometimes easier said than done for me. Great advice that's for sure. Great write. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

August 26, 2008 at 3:51 AM

that is the place to be, alwaya, true true, love kristin

Farah Chamma

August 25, 2008 at 8:13 AM

That's a wonderful write...Expression of great feeling..Thanks for sharing... The young one, Farah

Mohammad Yamin

August 25, 2008 at 7:43 AM

Dear Deneen, Your beautiful poem contains a great resolve to release the inner tumultous thoughts -wonderfull. Thanks for your generous comments on my poem Worshipper of Love. -Mohammad

Daver Austin

August 25, 2008 at 6:29 AM

Good write, and good advice. Love, daver

Brian Strand

August 25, 2008 at 12:21 AM

Good advice Deneen.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Helen J Radford

August 24, 2008 at 11:26 PM

I love the simplicity of this piece, and of course its wonderful wisdom. Thank you very much for the comment you left on my work too. Nice to meet you! Helen