Stil

Michele with one L and her voice Tells me in soprano that she no longer loves The L that always pains my heart And with care I watch the note fade Alone again watching my P's and Q's It's the L that I long for as the water falls Stil hear your song as I lie at night The heart beats strong but without your L The word has no meaning Stil isn't a word without your L My heart is stil without you For my friend Michele who spells her name with one L after I spelled it with two L's

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Marrissa Kamckey- Harms

Date: 4/12/2013 7:45:00 AM

I LOVE this poem. Its so beautiful, and really shows how much love can effect someone. Like I had said.... i love it.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/10/2013 9:02:00 AM

I love it Patrick. Reminds me of an old boyfriend and me. We'd leave secret notes on each other's cars during lunch hour (different schools different lunch hours). Instead of words we'd use numbers for each letter. 1-4-3. (I love you). Michele must love this poem. love, Kathy

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 4/5/2013 10:39:00 PM

Intimate and bittersweet....what a romantic is mourning the lost letters!