Stick Figure

a simple little stick in the center of a blank page i mean nothing always have a little head silly circle with a smile but there should be a frown instead even though i smile i mean nothing always have no realistic qualities that could deem me human i'm no human i'm a figure a lonely figure and even though i smile i mean nothing always have
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mac Donald Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 11:00 PM
A sad and thought provoking write, Juli-Michelle. Children love drawing 'stick' people, but they always have a story attached to them, making them loved and more meaningful. Best wishes to you! Mikki (thank you for your comment!:)
Grisetti Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:07 PM
Sounds sad, but makes one think. A great poem always does.
Bauer Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:49 PM
a very creative way to present this poem, which is sad but beautifully expressed.
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