Steve Is Poor

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Scrooge counted pennies no waste at his door Steve however was very very very poor brandy sour was all there was the sweetness all gone with morning doves no food for thought rations the norm Jane left when eyes were closed the street her only new chore a penny for ones thoughts as history repeats Napoleon marched many died I sip my brandy asking why?

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/12/2018 8:41:00 AM

A poetic insightful view into society and the different classes it harbors. Are our opinions worth just pennies, or more? Do those in power care? ~ Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/12/2018 6:19:00 AM

The contrast between wealthy Scrooge and penniless Steve is well-developed, Arthur. It appears the class system lives on, my friend and if we don't learn from history, we are often doomed to repeat it. Really like this one as it gave me much to ponder. Well done! Hugs, Carolyn

Billy Jones

Date: 12/11/2018 10:14:00 PM

Very good Poem, was a nice read liked this one a lot ^_^

Jan Allison

Date: 12/11/2018 3:09:00 AM

Such sad imagery especially at this time of year Art. I am sure Steve was much more sensible than scrooge, if Steve had a candle at least he'd have lit it and got heat and warmth not like the old guy lol . hugs Jan xx