Stepping Through Time

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Written for poetry contest: Stepping Through Time.....I had 19th century culture in mind.

A gauzy haze rises from the flickering gas light, 
                      revealing the face of a blushing coquette.
             Stepping through time in voluminous dress, bustled and bowed, 
                                       a petite silhouette.
              She offers her hand to the handsome uniformed, callow cadet.

                        She moves with eloquence, poise and grace;
     He, smitten by her charming demeanor, peaceful, porcelain, angelic face.
                      Flustered at first, heart pounding accepting his advances, 
                           a gentle kiss and lingering embraces.

            The afternoon brought festivities of equestrian competition.
         Young cadets, eager to advance, entered to raise their rank and position;
        His prowess boasted by the charm of his lady admirer's recognition.

She arrives in a brimmed bonnet, settling in her seat, vying for clear view;
                          Awaiting her chivalrous cavalier, 
             preparing, taking position, for the race to ensue.


                          A shot is fired, she sees him from afar, 
                  waving his silk flag of gold, green and blue.
          
           Gallant and proud, spurring his steady steed without yield.
  Thunderous hooves in a cloud of dust, neck and neck as he rounds the field;
        Pursing only, the love of his lady, and winning the coveted, golden shield.

February 6, 2017 For Stepping Through Time Contest, February 22, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/25/2022 3:42:00 PM
Paulette, I really like this poem. I am ARMY all the way. a 1st Lt still in the Texas Guard. I can see this scene... The dashing young Lt (me long ago) and the beautiful maiden not yet 19... she is long gone, replaced by the true love of my life.. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/26/2022 5:20:00 AM
Thank you David for stopping by with positive comments and that brought you back, to a place in time, a fond memory of your own life. And, by the way, I am in awe of all men like you, who have proudly served our country. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/20/2020 6:11:00 AM
very discriptive excelent scheme, loved it! WOW! you are good
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Date: 2/28/2017 8:26:00 AM
Nicely done, I feel like a time traveler; great images, historically clear.
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Date: 2/19/2017 3:02:00 PM
This is a beautiful (and skilful) evocation of the Civil War period, an era which understood the world in a way that we have lost. Well done!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/20/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank You....and yes a time we have surely lost but so nice to remember!
Date: 2/19/2017 10:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Well done!
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:27:00 PM
I'm loving this piece. Classy image and so beautiful :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 12:19:00 PM
Well done! I enjoyed the scene!!! All the best in the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:56:00 PM
Oh, so descriptive and WHO was this famous person!!!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/13/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I understand your point, my famous person was not clear....too vague....I had Robert E. Lee in mind as a young West Point Cadet.....I appreciate the critique!
Date: 2/8/2017 9:03:00 AM
Hi Donna, Thank you....it was fun to write. I see you also entered the contest....yours is "Fabulous"....Good Luck!
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:16:00 PM
Marvelous. ..simply marvelous
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/8/2017 12:07:00 PM
Hi Donna, Thank you.....it was fun to write. I see you also entered the contest....yours is "Fabulous"....good luck!
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