Stepping Out

As
I scent
something new
my taste buds grow-
a
bud,
swells
as the 
chocolate
plant flowers my
nose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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February 25, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Why the "a" on line 4? Not line 5? Why the repetition of the word bud? not an evocative word to begin with? Last 3 lines charmingly silly. This is you? Light & Love Debbie PS I must have cheap chocolate it doesn't have much of a smell?
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