Stepping Into the Woods

STEPPING INTO THE WOODS
Submerged in the sea of the maddening crowd I see a verdant island emerge in lonesome me, displacing the sound stratum of cacophony loud, unattached from the anchored mind I make me free. In the precinct of pristine sprawling thicket I wander, as the rising sun bursts with colors on calm canopy golden beams flush the leaves in spectral splendor, in the tranquil depth of silence I merge with serenity. In the embracing breeze the enchanted boughs quiver, make mystique motif with lattice of light and shadow, to me the tapestry of ecstasy the foliage offers forever. How to hold it within me or make it mine I won’t know. From the cool cradle of copse I’ve a long way to go with the forlorn life across the amber landscape fallow. Grandeur of emerald sheen in my mind I’d strive to stow, create for my pale heart an expanse of jade meadow. When I'd seek rest in the fading hours of twilight glow I’d step into the waiting woods, melt me in its shadow.
Written : January 9, 2019. February 5, 2020 Contest : Strand Select D, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Back with more congrats, Subimal.
Carber Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Quite lovely in its very sensuous and lyrical tone-- congrats on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Thank you so much for your visit, and for your nice comments.
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Beautiful imagery, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Thank you, Eve for your nice comments.
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 5:19 PM
Beautifully written, Subimal! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:18 AM
Many thanks, Sandra for your comments, much appreciated.
Y. Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Hi Subimal, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:18 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
One Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:26 AM
So many great lines in this poem Subimal, with great rhyme and flow.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:18 AM
Thank you for the placement, SO.
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