Stepping From Fall To Winter

Stepping from fall to winter
is a difficult journey for some,
our minds are still living in orange
as our surroundings turn white,
leaving us confused and in fright.

The warmth of the mighty sun wans,
replaced by chilly and biting winds,
entering our hearts and bones to freeze,
an icy greeting which we try to ignore,
opposite of the sunny sun which we adore.

Embers and snowflakes become our song,
fireplaces are lit to keep us warm and toasty
while a monochromatic wonder exists outside,
dancing crystals flow to the solstice beat,
late night glowing logs no longer keep the heat.

Waiting for old man winter to leave,
counting the days seem to take forever,
animals are smart as they hibernate,
sleeping within a cozy and warm den,
as a human writes this poem with a cold pen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Sonia, I see this won something, so I congratulate you for that. Also, I enjoyed this seasonal poem. You should see it here in Utah. It's hardly winter at all!! I'm loving it. Where are YOU?
Walker Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Andrea, We live in the Treasure Valley of Idaho (Caldwell). So far it has been a mild winter compared to last year. My husband Bob and I enjoy visiting Utah. We moved from Anchorage, Alaska to Caldwell a few years ago. Thank you for your congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
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January 19, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sonia - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-)
Walker Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:15 AM
Gregory, thank you for your support. Have a great weekend. ~ Sonia
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January 18, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your win here Sonia! I would also like to hibernate during the winter months :) Not fond of this cold!! Lovely write! ~Judy
Walker Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Judy, your kind comment on my poem, 'Stepping from Fall to Winter' is genuinely appreciated. Winter is fun to look at on picture postcards only. Thank you, Sonia.
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Congrats on your win, Sonia. Well done.
Walker Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Line, thank you for your encouragement. ~ Sonia
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Sonia, nicely done congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Walker Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Eve, I appreciate your uplifting comment. Hugs, Sonia
A  Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Sonia Walker, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
Walker Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Skat, I am honored to be placed within your contest. Thank you for making my day a happy one. ~ Sonia
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 12:29 PM
A nice cup of hot chocolate might help your cold hands Sonia, well done...
Walker Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Have a great New Year. ~ Sonia
Blanca Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Sonis, Nice write about the seasons. Burrrrrrr
Walker Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Carlos, I appreciate your comment. Winters are everything but warm. ~ Sonia
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