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Stepping From Fall To Winter

Stepping from fall to winter is a difficult journey for some, our minds are still living in orange as our surroundings turn white, leaving us confused and in fright. The warmth of the mighty sun wans, replaced by chilly and biting winds, entering our hearts and bones to freeze, an icy greeting which we try to ignore, opposite of the sunny sun which we adore. Embers and snowflakes become our song, fireplaces are lit to keep us warm and toasty while a monochromatic wonder exists outside, dancing crystals flow to the solstice beat, late night glowing logs no longer keep the heat. Waiting for old man winter to leave, counting the days seem to take forever, animals are smart as they hibernate, sleeping within a cozy and warm den, as a human writes this poem with a cold pen.

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Date: 1/22/2018 5:36:00 PM
Sonia, I see this won something, so I congratulate you for that. Also, I enjoyed this seasonal poem. You should see it here in Utah. It's hardly winter at all!! I'm loving it. Where are YOU?
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:17:00 PM
Andrea, We live in the Treasure Valley of Idaho (Caldwell). So far it has been a mild winter compared to last year. My husband Bob and I enjoy visiting Utah. We moved from Anchorage, Alaska to Caldwell a few years ago. Thank you for your congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 1/19/2018 11:56:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sonia - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:15:00 AM
Gregory, thank you for your support. Have a great weekend. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/18/2018 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win here Sonia! I would also like to hibernate during the winter months :) Not fond of this cold!! Lovely write! ~Judy
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Date: 1/18/2018 12:28:00 PM
Judy, your kind comment on my poem, 'Stepping from Fall to Winter' is genuinely appreciated. Winter is fun to look at on picture postcards only. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 1/17/2018 8:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sonia. Well done.
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Line, thank you for your encouragement. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/17/2018 7:32:00 PM
Sonia, nicely done congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:45:00 AM
Eve, I appreciate your uplifting comment. Hugs, Sonia
Date: 1/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Sonia Walker, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:58:00 PM
Skat, I am honored to be placed within your contest. Thank you for making my day a happy one. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/2/2018 12:29:00 PM
A nice cup of hot chocolate might help your cold hands Sonia, well done...
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Have a great New Year. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/2/2018 11:49:00 AM
Sonis, Nice write about the seasons. Burrrrrrr
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:32:00 PM
Carlos, I appreciate your comment. Winters are everything but warm. ~ Sonia

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