Stepdance

With speedy, gutsy ease
          her Irish father rolls up the front room rug
          Gaelic music lathers the air in merriment
Nelligen at 8, composed
                       snags our attention
                       in hard shoe clicking
her rapid, intricate footwork
                       its drumming effect, a heart pulsating 

Nell's rigid torso
                        that trails upward to white-blond hair
                        bouncing,
                        catching light like weightless feathers
Small feet in black hard shoes
                        tapping
                        from toes to heels
Image fixed in place like her pale rose-bud skin

Up against the wall, I mimic her movements 
My feet a tangled jigsaw
She laughs, kisses my cheek, tousles my hair
                                                     like tufts of grass
At 9, I want to go to her, to cradle her state of grace
         for however long we are children

The suddenness of age frames our winter
A peer backwards through a series of lenses
          to stitched moments that slide in memory
          foot taps through our rooms

I know full well that I am responsible for my own mis-steps
           for sitting out her dances
           for never solving most puzzles
           even when I pull back
                                        from now






Poem composed: June 13, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:07 PM
A delightful poetic story, Brian! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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January 17, 2022 at 2:27 PM
My appreciation, Kim, for your stop by + comment. I was just reading your wonderful Haikus. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Bowden Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Nicely written and presented. You have a unique style. Congrats.
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Craig. I value input from poets who encourage + you are generous to do so. All the best, Brian
Radice Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:11 PM
Your poetry is getting the credit it so richly deserves Brian but whether your poetry 'wins' or doesn't 'win'; it really doesn't matter. It's great anyway. "The suddenness of age frames our winter" - - How I wish I had written that! I agree with Connie, Your words draw the reader in. Just simply great! Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Greetings Gary. My sincerest appreciation for your thoughtful appraisal of my work. You are spot on when you mention that contest placement is subjective. It is always a boost to be recognized by one's peers, however. Your encouraging comments lift my pen once more. Thank you. Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Your poem glows brightly in the spotlight where it belongs Brian. This poem is exceptional and not just because I am mostly Irish, do I love its Irish flavors but because your talent has the ability to draw the reader in as if they are a part of the scene in an almost tangible way. I am Faving this brilliant winning poem. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Most appreciative of your gracious comments, Connie. Nell was a sprite, beautiful lass. She dances with me still. Be well. Brian
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 10:14 AM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Thank you. Kind of you to visit + comment Sara. I jigged the poem a bit before re-entering the piece into Brian's contest. Often, I revise work. Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:38 AM
"even when I pull back from now" - Beautiful. Great Work! Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Thanks very much for your supportive stop by Christuraj. Hope that you are well. Brian
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, you deserve it with this intimate and introspective great poem. Blessings and best wishes
Sambourne Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Your generosity of words gives my resolve to write a much appreciated lift. Thank you, Lasaad. Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 7:58 AM
I know full well that I am responsible for my own mis-steps Beautiful Owning Up. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:21 AM
My appreciation for your stop by + thoughtful comment. The poem received an NA in one contest, but Brian Strand graciously rescued it from exclusion. Cheers Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Lucky guy.
Sambourne Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Nelligen was a radiant Irish lass. I hold her memory to the end of my days. Best wishes, Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:55 AM
I like how introspective and intimate this piece is. I suspect it will do well in the contest. A wonderfully expressed piece.
Sambourne Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Richard. I recall that lovely Irish girl to this day when we both shared moments of bliss as children. Be well. Brian
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