Step In the Past

I sat in the kitchen, Mum stood at the sink,
the radio nattered away,
when all of a sudden she stopped washing the pots,
a Fleetwood Mac song started to play.
It was 'Albatross', “ We used to both dance to this,
a Slow Foxtrot, your Dad and me,
come on, grab my hand, have a go, learn the steps
it is easy to do, as you'll see ”.
We stood face to face, hand in hand and began,
as she walked through the steps like a pro,
I tried to pick up both the rhythm and steps
without crushing all of her toes.
We moved round the floor in a figure of eight,
by the end of the song not too bad,
and with a smile on her face, both eyes closed,
for a second,
she danced Slow Foxtrot with my late Dad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Closing brought tears to my eyes my friend. Our mother lost our dad in 1969 and lived on 48 more years missing him. Now we 11 children are missing them both... A fav... a tender scene that reminds..
Murray Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:10 AM
I danced at the teenage disco to this with my first crush when only thirteen Viv. I have loved the tune ever since.
Krampe Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:34 AM
What a lovely poem, Viv. Music has a way to bring up memories.
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:58 AM
Thanks Agnes, indeed it does. Viv x
Laurie Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:36 AM
Hello Viv … just a wonderful poem Viv. No need to write any more - thanks Viv - Longwarry
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:58 AM
Cheers, Lindsay, appreciate you stopping by. regards, Viv
Ashley Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Oh the sting of tender tears as I read your last line,Viv, and poignant reality set in. A captivating and moving piece that reached in and touched my heart and gave me reason to linger over your beautiful verses.. brilliant and emotional poetry. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Thanks, Susan, very kind. Viv x
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 4:42 PM
this was so beautiful, Viv. What a way to remember your dad and your mother remembering him(through you)
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Thanks, Andrea, funny the things that come back from distant memory when a song plays. Viv x
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 7:02 AM
A dance of love and family..that ending is superb!
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 4:28 AM
aww what a tender poem Mr Viv, music can bring back so many memories. I wonder if my poem inspired you to write this lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:00 AM
Pure coincidence, Jan, great minds etc... Viv x
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 2:37 AM
A lovely moment indeed Viv, a song resurfaces the memories. Lovely song too. Tom
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:00 AM
Yes, a fine song. Timeless.Thanks, Tom . Regards, Viv
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