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Step By Step Along the Sand

There's a place I love to walk along that brings along a breeze in the air as your feet in the sand leaves its mark so thrilling having this place so rare On Bonnie Scotland's country of Ayrshire at Irvine's beach park on the west coast looking back over the hilly slopes behind such a picture of inspiration one can boast One watches the waves roll in so fully transforming upon the mind the ripples of water so soothing makes your pen move to be signed Standing watching dogs have fun splashing among the waters blue matching the beautiful sky above a picture indeed looks brand new Memories of this keep me going when in bleak winter can't get there lifts your spirit makes one's ink flow gives one's writing an added flair (Writing on my favourite inspirational place to visit uplifting my spirits and give me the needed direction to write with heavenly guidance.)

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Date: 9/21/2019 7:44:00 PM
A place I'd like to visit for sure. God Bless You
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/22/2019 2:59:00 AM
Thanks Regina, Trust one day you'll get there, we had a beautiful sunny day yesterday on the beach on the Ayrshire west coast. I'll look more of your works later. GOd bless, Gordon
Date: 9/20/2019 11:09:00 AM
Wow Gordon, this place sounds so magical and you have brought it to life with your poetic pen. Thank your for sharing your special place Gordon and with your I inspirational write and perfect imagery, I feel I am there too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Ann, glad you were enthused about this place and felt it took you there too. Hope you're having great day, lovely and sunny up here today, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 9/20/2019 6:58:00 AM
Sounds beautiful ! Being close to water is very important to me too . I really enjoyed reading this :-) x
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, glad you enjoyed this piece and indeed lovely to be near the waterside. Have a blessed day,Gordon
Date: 9/19/2019 7:09:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell, this poem makes me yearn to be by the waterside. have a nice evening my friend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, glad you enjoyed it and hope you find some water near you. Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 9/19/2019 6:41:00 PM
what a gorgeous write flowing from your pen, it sounds like a perfect place to go! :) hugs
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 3:14:00 AM
Thanks Sandy, Glad you enjoyed it and it always is indeed. Have a blessed day, poetry hugs, Gordon
Date: 9/19/2019 5:46:00 PM
Sounds lovely Gordon!;)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 3:13:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, Yes it always has been each time I go though make sure it's not in winter. Blessings, Gordon

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