Steinbecks California Town

Steinbecks California Town

Part of me my love
will always miss
that part of you 
surrendered to my heart 
the first time 
we made love 
beside  Monterrey Bay
the  morning sun was on the rise
as the of the walls of our defenses 
came down..brick by brick
kiss by kiss

I fell in love with you
more than I knew possible
in Steinbecks California town

Three days by a bay
long hot showers for  two
a  room we might  forget one day
the scent of passion so deep so intense
we would never forget…ever
lost soul mates discovered
side by side.heartbeat within heartbeat
walking beside  an ice cold sea
shared kisses hot as flame
we owned… those days
a souvenir no one could ever buy

I love you more now
than I ever thought possible
in Steinbecks California town

Irish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/25/2010 11:56:00 PM
Wonderful love story, Michael! John Steinbeck is one of my favorite authors and his descriptions of the towns in Cannery Row and Grapes of Wrath were so vivid. You brought back some great memories for me! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:49:00 PM
beautifully romantic
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:35:00 AM
A hot love story to join the 'sizzle club', Michael!.....Allie
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