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Steering Kite

steering kite
high among clouds ~
summer days dwindling



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Kyle Kriticos

April 17, 2018 at 8:11 PM

I really liked this. You are truly mastering the art of Hai Ku if I do say so myself!

Line Gauthier

April 17, 2018 at 9:36 PM

Thanks, Kyle. Apparently you never master Haiku, it's just fun trying.

Dale Gregory Cozart

April 16, 2018 at 2:16 PM

Awesome haiku. Very sharp images. And so modern!

Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 2:36 PM

Thank you, Dale, I hope most people realize the quotation marks were implied on that second line. LOL

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 16, 2018 at 10:15 AM

Imagery that sizzles. Lovely done. xomo

Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 2:39 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Maureen.

Tom Cunningham

April 16, 2018 at 4:08 AM

I do love late summer as it creeps into autumn.Lovely hakiu Line. Tom.

Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM

A lovely and very distant memory. Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Tom.

Supraja Kannan

April 16, 2018 at 3:31 AM

Lovely imagery... I enjoyed this cute haiku...

Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Thank you, Supraja.

Eileen Manassian

April 16, 2018 at 3:30 AM

:) Another good haiku, Line. I'm glad you can write haiku so well. Dwindling summer days might not make many happy, but I don't like the heat and the humidity that summer brings...at least in my part of the world. Hugs

Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Eileen. Much appreciated.