Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Steep Eagerness

greets first kiss and hug 
        as rapt tears roll down the cheeks?  
                        invaded by my dove troops  

eager dwelled for life 
         wander with me on a trip
                        sate my thoughts with your flavor





2021 July 12
Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
HMS & PS; 577, 577

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Delice Arleen Skelly July 14, 2021 at 12:09 AM I have not got around to the contests yet, One day perhaps. I am having a hard job keeping up with everyone. I usually check-in for a read every other day amazed at the number of contests.....

Vijay Pandit July 13, 2021 at 5:54 AM Much longing in these words, Lasaad. All the best. Sotto Poet July 13, 2021 at 10:27 AM Thanks for reading and commenting Vijay

Victor Buhagiar July 12, 2021 at 11:20 PM War and peace. Very well done. Best for a win. Sotto Poet July 13, 2021 at 10:29 AM Thanks for your kind words, Victor, blessings, and kindest wishes

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2021 at 2:12 PM Nice one. I have yet to check out this form and contest. Sotto Poet July 13, 2021 at 10:30 AM Thanks, Andrea, I think it's something new to try.