Steeleness Deadsilent

STEELENESS , dead silent

Ascetic
Broken Austerity 
Delusion
Copasetic in poverty
Mass-confusion
Pathetically unspoken
Orphaned 
Disparity 
Silent burial
Silent ceremony.


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Written Dec. 08th 2014. This is something that I wrote (after my good friends fathers funeral)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrabarty Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Love Joel. I am really moved you have shown your great love to me and to my poem. STEELENESS deadsilent is a real decent from asceticism to despairing grave---dead silence /excellent. God bless you> Love XXXX rajat
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 3:48 PM
Funerals can be strangely inspiring for poetry! I have found this to be so!
Carey Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Beautifully Sad! Feel Better! It is a Wonderful Gift to have friends who Care! <3
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