Steel Rims

trying not to roll
car skidding out of control….
bald tires take their toll
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:21 PM
This has happened to me. TWo blowouts on freeways. YIKKERS.
Mister Roboto Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 8:56 PM
and the sparks did fly! Bald tires are no good for cops and Robbers! ~JSLambert
Sweetheart Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 6:33 AM
oh so true my friend.. treads wear down quicker when speeding takes it's toll luv.. feeling the thrill of the ride in this piece Robb..
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 11:53 PM
Nicely rhymed steel rims, Robb!
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