Steamy Friend

Steamy Friend

Hot sizzler
Steamy friend
Stormy Sunday
Here again
Let it go
Feel the flow
Ocean roars
All outdoors
July fly
Lights the night
Solstice glow
Magic sight
Slow hazy
July noon
So lazy
Cancer moon
August ways
Shorter sun
Dog days nigh
School’s begun
Cool on down
Steamy friend
Your grand time
Gone again

7/29/16

seasonssummerrhyme

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/10/2017 2:10:00 AM

This is wonderful, Janis, I enjoyed it very much! So whimsical and joyous, with a perfect tempo - congrats!! :-)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your comments.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/14/2017 10:48:00 PM

Fantastic rhythm and flow, Janis! I like it! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/16/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

Beautiful Scars

Date: 4/4/2017 6:05:00 PM

loved this the first time I read it last year! Beautiful rhythm and rhyme...thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/5/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thanks luloo. Great contest.

Beautiful Scars

Date: 9/29/2016 9:24:00 PM

WHAT? this was amazing...should've placed much higher- all due respect to the judge, just my opinion...Loved it :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/30/2016 9:52:00 AM

Its been a while and I'll have to look this one up. Thanks luloo.