Steamy Friend

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Steamy Friend Hot sizzler Steamy friend Stormy Sunday Here again Let it go Feel the flow Ocean roars All outdoors July fly Lights the night Solstice glow Magic sight Slow hazy July noon So lazy Cancer moon August ways Shorter sun Dog days nigh School’s begun Cool on down Steamy friend Your grand time Gone again 7/29/16

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/10/2017 2:10:00 AM

This is wonderful, Janis, I enjoyed it very much! So whimsical and joyous, with a perfect tempo - congrats!! :-)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your comments.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/14/2017 10:48:00 PM

Fantastic rhythm and flow, Janis! I like it! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/16/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

Lu Loo

Date: 4/4/2017 6:05:00 PM

loved this the first time I read it last year! Beautiful rhythm and rhyme...thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/5/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thanks luloo. Great contest.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/29/2016 9:24:00 PM

WHAT? this was amazing...should've placed much higher- all due respect to the judge, just my opinion...Loved it :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/30/2016 9:52:00 AM

Its been a while and I'll have to look this one up. Thanks luloo.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2016 3:28:00 AM

This is going to be a top winner Janis I predict! It has flow and grace and expresses so artfully summer! 7 ; )

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/2/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Connie. We shall see. Thanks also for the rating....

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/31/2016 2:20:00 PM

I love it, Janis, and had such fun running through it - the read was just as refreshing as running through a sprinkler. Good job ... CayCay

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/31/2016 3:12:00 PM

Thanks, glad to know this.......