Steamy Affair

I see you in deep thought of me,
and I ask myself if I should ripple your complexion..?

I gaze in those reflective eyes,
And simmer yet swim in those limpid pupils,
Staining your liquid sheets.

While subtle things begin to heat...
...Love’s stir infuses us as one concoction.

As souring...sweaty lemon juice… 
...beads from both of our shiny brows,
…I lowly steep in you.

Bubbling suds of passion,
...conclude our boiling saga.

I in you...you on me...water and tea,
Together we make...a nice warm beverage…
…for the world to sip our love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Excellent write here...I truly love the word play!! Very creative piece!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Chircop Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Wow...your words just keep getting better and better.Its feels so nice to.read 'you' again.One my favourite poets ever.Going tmfvs
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:40 PM
You were are always an.inspiration Raul.You and Ruben were my first two inspirers to.imtroduce me to haiku.Hope We ll.see a lot of your poetry Raul..
Moreno Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:12 PM
thanks for the wonderful words. It's nice to see you guys as well. I hope to inspire and find inspiration. I need to catch up and read some of your work...
Richards Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Wow, Raul........your poetry has evolved and grown and is wonderfully sensual in this particular piece. I would love to see you posting more of your work. So nice to have you back! :)
Moreno Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:09 PM
It's always nice to be back here, I enjoy seeing the familiar names mixed with the new.
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Raul a very romantic piece of work ...David
Moreno Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:08 PM
Thanks, I like putting a spin on normal things.
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