Steamy Affair

I see you in deep thought of me,
and I ask myself if I should ripple your complexion..?

I gaze in those reflective eyes,
And simmer yet swim in those limpid pupils,
Staining your liquid sheets.

While subtle things begin to heat...
...Love’s stir infuses us as one concoction.

As souring...sweaty lemon juice… 
...beads from both of our shiny brows,
…I lowly steep in you.

Bubbling suds of passion,
...conclude our boiling saga.

I in you...you on me...water and tea,
Together we make...a nice warm beverage…
…for the world to sip our love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/8/2013 8:21:00 AM
Excellent write here...I truly love the word play!! Very creative piece!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:23:00 PM
Wow...your words just keep getting better and better.Its feels so nice to.read 'you' again.One my favourite poets ever.Going tmfvs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/5/2013 11:40:00 PM
You were are always an.inspiration Raul.You and Ruben were my first two inspirers to.imtroduce me to haiku.Hope We ll.see a lot of your poetry Raul..
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/5/2013 11:12:00 PM
thanks for the wonderful words. It's nice to see you guys as well. I hope to inspire and find inspiration. I need to catch up and read some of your work...
Date: 3/4/2013 8:43:00 AM
Wow, Raul........your poetry has evolved and grown and is wonderfully sensual in this particular piece. I would love to see you posting more of your work. So nice to have you back! :)
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/5/2013 11:09:00 PM
It's always nice to be back here, I enjoy seeing the familiar names mixed with the new.
Date: 3/3/2013 7:55:00 AM
Raul a very romantic piece of work ...David
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/5/2013 11:08:00 PM
Thanks, I like putting a spin on normal things.
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