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Steam Train To the Sea

We are all gathered on the platform Jumping up and down with glee We can see the smoke of the puffing train Coming nearer to take us to the sea We are off on a Whitsun treat Forty children or more Many adults to look after us Experience told them what was the score They heaved on wicker baskets of goodies And crates of lemonade We were off to Barry Island for a Picnic Just a half hours ride away The seats were rather hard and had mesh racks above to store luggage for folk Opened up the windows with a leather strap Stuck out heads to a face full of smuts and smoke The choc choo sound was so exhilarating Excitement grew with every mile Wanted to be that train driver with his whistle To pull that chain that made the sound, bringing smiles. Had a wonderful time on the sands Paddled our feet in the sea Gathered around to eat our food Washed down for the adults with gallons of tea Forty tired and happy children Clambered aboad that train for home The clicketty clack of the wheels the sway of the carriage, sending them to sleep and dream We were soon at our home station So sleepy yet didn't want the day to end Tired and dirty, had a lovely day in the sun Starting the day aboard a steam train that puffed around the bend. Penned January 20 2015

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Date: 4/26/2015 7:45:00 PM
Could almost taste the lemonade. . . loved it. Best Wishes EM
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/28/2015 2:39:00 AM
Thank you for finding this poem, glad you enjoyed... Seren
Date: 2/1/2015 1:59:00 PM
SEREN, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/28/2015 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Skat ...Seren
Date: 1/26/2015 12:12:00 AM
Lovely memories retold well, congrats on the win, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/28/2015 2:40:00 AM
Thank you Ram
Date: 1/25/2015 7:18:00 PM
A very well descriptive and amazing journey of children on a fascinating train ride you have written, Seren. Congratulations on your win. Blessings eve
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/26/2015 6:16:00 PM
thank you Eve your comments appreciated....Seren
Date: 1/25/2015 3:54:00 PM
Sounds like an amazing journey Seren many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:17:00 PM
such a fun journey Seren congrats on placing in my contest hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2015 3:28:00 PM
thanks Shadow, my little bit of research paid off ...Seren
Date: 1/23/2015 4:46:00 PM
Ahhh!! Great memory shared..I enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2015 3:29:00 PM
no thank you Sara ......Seren
Date: 1/22/2015 1:08:00 PM
appealing to the charmed senses, seren... great work!.. huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2015 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Nette it sounds wonderful, I would have loved it....Seren
Date: 1/21/2015 3:03:00 PM
Must have been a fun adventure...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2015 5:27:00 PM
I dont know Tim, just a poem I am afraid and a lot of imagination...Seren
Date: 1/21/2015 11:01:00 AM
I like your approach to the theme of railway journeys, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2015 5:23:00 PM
Had been reading some stories that entailed the old steam train,, so I sort of let my imagination run.....Seren

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