Steam Rolling Thunder

A fierce raging storm 
Freight trains through the open plains
Conquering the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Mastery of imageries is how I think of you ... this poem is proof
Fraser Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Awesome images of the iron horse meandering through the praries of the States. Oh how i wish i was there>>James
Strand Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 1:14 AM
Great work here Abe like the analogy in L 1/2.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:33 PM
You make this look so easy. nice work.
Neese Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 10:44 AM
thanks Mr.L
Exit Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 12:06 PM
mr.lopez YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION
Yarnell Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 11:49 AM
god such a powerful poem
Winter Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Terrifying to be caught in one. Awesome haiku. Thanks for your comment on my latest, appreciate it. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 7:41 PM
Great imagery, storm season is in full bloom. nice job...Raul
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