Stealthy Love

One tanka ~~ on theme ~~love note~~5/7/5/7/7


Stealthy love is
Like cactus in desert
Thriving for dry air,
Grows up tempestuously
A ghost eluding touch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Phillips Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 12:52 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, I like this poem, it is beautiful. "A ghost eluding touch" very strong and beautiful line
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 5:04 AM
- A beautiful tanka poem Dr. Upma! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Anne !!
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