Stealth Cat Creeps

stealth cat creeps closer gets in my lap disrupts thoughts... muse has left the scene

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2012 7:57:00 PM

I LOVE this one and what it conveys, SAra.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/19/2012 8:04:00 AM

lol, got a great visual from this one, Sara

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/17/2012 7:26:00 PM

Cute, Like this one really lots. My Dad was like that, from his parents who named me Jonathan before I was born and had baby clothes embroidered. What a shock it was for them. My Grandmother never let me forget, either. At her house all i ever did was watch my cousins (3 boys) play.

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/17/2012 6:58:00 PM

if ever i lol this was one of them. and a good one at that. we had cats like that way long ago when i was married. they insisted on being peted.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/17/2012 12:12:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku Sara! I loved the curiosity of the cat! Awesome poem! Great Work!!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/17/2012 9:56:00 AM

I love it!

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/17/2012 9:06:00 AM

Excellent! I posted for the first time here, yesterday (haikus)! I have a mania for haikus. They fit into my mentality, they're appropriate for English!