Stealing My Life

Ive allowed someone to steal,
away from him the way i feel.
Carvings, words, curbs,
I never meant what i meant and now i am disturbed.
But to her i meant it,
those hateful words where sent.
It's only a momentary dent,
a unfaithful little bend.
Go away all you haters,
all you unfaithful traitors.
The day darkens, 
a demonic angel harkens.
Praise the death of another suicide.
Another's waste of skin, another deadly time.
I've fallen and i cant get up,
c'mon little pup,
she whispers words of sin,
letting little bullets made of tin,
hit my skin.
Take the gun,
pull the trigger,
cut a little deeper,
And wish for death to over come my last faithful wish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 27, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Tiffany. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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January 26, 2010 at 5:35 PM
This would be an excellent entry for the contest on Betrayal, very nice....Karla
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