Stealer of Children

The children come to visit
   once or twice a week
   and they are fine, I'm sure,
   but not the ones I seek.
Though tall and fair and handsome,
   not who I'd choose to meet:
   those grubby-kneed and tousled,
   the freshly apple-cheeked!

Oh, what I'd give to see them
   running in the door,
   coats and hats and mittens,
   footprints on the floor.
Cardboard forts and castles
   and the day they tried to take
   sand buckets full of water
   to make a bedroom lake!

Another trip to the E.R.
   Superman has tried
   (with a towel for a cape)
   to fly above the concrete drive.
My daughter's arm is up around
   a Great Dane's hulking dome.
   He's all alone, she said
   and declined to take him home.

The toaster that they took apart
   to see how it was sprung,
   signal beeps from bedrooms
   where a net of wires was strung
In hope of snaring messages
   from Tokyo or some Hong Kong,
   lipstick on the bathroom tiles
   when guests were due to come.

I play my games with memory toys,
   pretend they're real again,
   but something of it's gone;
   It's time, time is the stealer of children.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Callus Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:36 PM
This is delightfully written, and it flows so smoothly, Elizabeth. Time shows no mercy: one day we are young, the next we are old! What he steals he never gives back! ~ Regards // paul
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November 5, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Reminds me of ‘Puff the magic dragon’ which none of us realised, until the teacher told us, was about growing up. Kinda stuck with me ever since. Smashing write, Elizabeth. Terry
Mccann Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:51 PM
Thanks, Terry! Some writing is like that; everybody takes away his own idea of it. I never thought of Puff that way, but, there you go! Elizabeth
Delaney Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Hi Elizabeth: Time moves on so quickly…..yes it steals so much, great title. SuZ
Mccann Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Thanks, Suzanne! I woke from a dream of my children laughing and playing and all day felt bereft! Elizabeth
Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 8:46 AM
In my family, the children are grown, only the toys have changed LOL
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:52 AM
Time stops for no one until the afterlife and its eternity. Then time will die.
Mccann Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Yes. Don't you love it when somebody refers to an event, say the towers, and you're sure it was only two or three years ago? Where have all the roses gone? Elizabeth
Labyrinth Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 10:51 PM
Sad, but beautiful and true. xx Oh, lordy, my oh my..."and the day they tried to take sand buckets full of water to make a bedroom lake!" lol. Over in a flash. Blink and the magic disappears.
Mccann Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Dear Lady! I was so pleased with your comment. I love your work, so intricate, beautiful, and frightening! Elizabeth
Labyrinth Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:35 PM
all of the re-tell here, suggests highly creative prodigy. lol ... re the one with lipstick on mirrors, made me think of this.... "Artist covers entire house with doodles" - BBC News /
Labyrinth Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:34 PM
https://youtu.be/Oc0GiglIF0A
Volumes Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:24 PM
One minute they are there playing with toys and before we know it they are gone! I look back over the past, did I let them grow up too fast? I guess time just stole them. Wonderful poem Elizabeth.
Mccann Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:19 PM
Kind of you to comment, Wendy. I thought hey, maybe other people feel this way, too! Turns out, they do! Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:40 PM
True enough. Time steals a lot of things, though it can't steal our memories. (Then again, there's Alzheimer's to do that). On the other hand: The best is yet to come. I truly believe that, and I guess I'm living proof. Life began at 40 for me, and then kicked in even better at 69. Go figure!
Wolf Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:31 PM
I agree up to a point. 70's are great mentally. Physically (for me) - not so much.... And I can't believe you're 90. I maintain that you're 90 going on 9! What's a zero here and there, anyway?!!
Mccann Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:51 PM
I've got good news! The 70's are even better! Must admit I'm stalled somewhat now..at 90. Liz
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