Steal the Show

Powerful electric bolts
Steal the show
That is displayed 
By the storm clouds

Clouds covering the sun
Giving off  brown and black color
With a yellow glow on the edge
A golden yellow in the center

Miles and miles of wheat
Growing on the prairie
Rain  God's gift
Lightening bringing nitrogen

Two need elements
For the wheat's health
Let us be like the lightening
Bringing life and nourishment

Needed elements to the earth
To help make people whole
Seeing God in us and his power
Like the lightening's display
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 5:01 PM
interesting ideas, enjoyed reading!!
Shango Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 10:30 AM
A great tribute to Creationism ... a sweet repose of faith in a loved write.
Freeman Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 4:44 PM
I am with you Sara, let us become lighting bolts of God Love. Shake this thing up before some get too comfortable.Smile, Sincerely Love, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Thankxxx Sara for enjoying my poetry tonight as I do yours always... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..
Nelson Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:59 AM
very unique, right away you realise the cliche lightning doest strikew the same place twice, and that is how god makes us unique like lightening biolts
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Nature's elements are quite awesome... enjoyed reading during this horrific Nor'Easter ..so far 12 inches have accumulated but more falling.. so your poetry has brightened my day ...enjoyed.. blessings.. luv.. and thankxxx for enjoying and commenting on my poetry.. Linda-Marie
Dufresne Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:00 AM
very inspiring analogy in this poem, Sara. Educating as well! -Robert
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