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Why do people always want commitment?
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I dread those moments when infatuation begins to be commitment. When a wanting to be together turns into an obligation. whoa, I can’t be “your” girl - I’m not looking to belong to you. What commands my heart who knows? But it can't be kept - pressed like a rose. Is a girl b#tchy if she won’t commit to a relationship?

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/31/2020 11:48:00 AM

It can be quite a challenge when parents, teachers, and government treat you as a child yet expect you to behave like an adult. There are quite a number of fish in a school, and it takes time and experience to sort them out - especially when they behave like a child! Good luck! Aloha! Rico

Anais Vionet
Date: 8/31/2020 6:12:00 PM

There are a lot of undesirable fish =] Thank you Rico =]

John Gondolf

Date: 8/31/2020 5:49:00 AM

Always be open and honest with those around you, Anais, let them know what you expect out of your relationship before the wanting becomes an obligation. And always follow your heart. You will probably break some hearts along the way but you must always look out for yours first. My humble thoughts for the day. John

Anais Vionet
Date: 8/31/2020 6:14:00 PM

I'm a beginner at the relationship game =] Thanks John =]

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2020 4:17:00 AM

- Great written, Anais :) - A good question you ask :) - // Anne-Lise :)