Steady Flow

Eddies arising in my heart,
Out of the turbulence;
Coloured waters of emotions,
Trivial yet significant, 
Forming my part

But amidst the vehemence,
Heart lies dormant,
No penetration of the walls
But it is no seed;
All in all  just returns the echo

Had it been leaves falling softly
From the good part of mind
Into the depths
Where the beams reach not;
Had it been the dulcet flute music,
Mingle with that unpleasant echo;
Where lie some dull icicles;
The Reynold would have gone down,
Germ pores formed;
Warm Waters' spectrum
Hence, STEADY and no frost

Date:-01/10/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 10:03 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ashley Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Dear Harshita, your wondrous pen spills beautiful yet melancholy imagery. Such amazing phrases; “Eddies arising in my heart” and “Had it been leaves falling softly /from the good part of mind /into the depths /where the beams reach not”- such exquisite introspective emotional expression. A wistful poem of splendid artistry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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