Steady As You Go

flow river flow
gently down the 
outcrop stream you go

trickling over cobblestones
and fallen branches
that's  been bestowed

mountain crest covered in snow
valleys and hilltops above and below
lies in solance as you boldly flow

puffs of white
seen in your passages sights
wonder whos lying by a fireplace tonight

ribbed tides
sea foam disguise
for it's just you and I

so flow river flow
gently down the outcrop stream you go
for where you stop know one knows



Entry For
Brian Strand's 
Flow River Flow Contest
GL All



Also Tribute To 
Great Rivers Lakes And Streams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Yes, this evokes a romantic feeling, as michael below here said. And it sure has that river FLOW! thanks for your comment to me. I saw you emailed that one guy back. that was very sweet of you. I tried twice and got nothing, so I am glad it worked for you, girl! Luv, Andrea
Jordan Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 4:35 AM
Katherine - sounds like a beautiful scene to me - very romantic feeling - Yf4L - Gos Bless you and Jenny, mj
Guzzi Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 1:44 PM
another great flow! Light & Love
Strand Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian.
Sheart Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Beautiful poem Katherine, will make a wonderful entry for Brian's contest.Best of luck! Enjoyed... Love Light Patty
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