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Steady As You Go

flow river flow gently down the outcrop stream you go trickling over cobblestones and fallen branches that's been bestowed mountain crest covered in snow valleys and hilltops above and below lies in solance as you boldly flow puffs of white seen in your passages sights wonder whos lying by a fireplace tonight ribbed tides sea foam disguise for it's just you and I so flow river flow gently down the outcrop stream you go for where you stop know one knows Entry For Brian Strand's Flow River Flow Contest GL All Also Tribute To Great Rivers Lakes And Streams

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Date: 1/9/2010 5:21:00 PM
Yes, this evokes a romantic feeling, as michael below here said. And it sure has that river FLOW! thanks for your comment to me. I saw you emailed that one guy back. that was very sweet of you. I tried twice and got nothing, so I am glad it worked for you, girl! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2010 4:35:00 AM
Katherine - sounds like a beautiful scene to me - very romantic feeling - Yf4L - Gos Bless you and Jenny, mj
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Date: 1/2/2010 1:44:00 PM
another great flow! Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:57:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian.
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem Katherine, will make a wonderful entry for Brian's contest.Best of luck! Enjoyed... Love Light Patty
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