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Staying Alive

STAYING ALIVE Awake! Mixed feelings The morning sensation All fears expectation Still in place Bold reluctance By responsibility replaced Leech and drive on! Reanimate! Rejuvenate! Staying alive!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2012 1:33:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Staying Alive"..I need the rejuvenate and reanimate for sure...Great enjoyed reading this work today..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 5:33:00 AM

and the sequel....here I go...

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 1/30/2012 10:18:00 PM

A very strong write, sir. Makes one wonder. This has to go in my favs. P.S. The name of this poem reminded me of Bee Gees!

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/30/2012 8:57:00 AM

survival 101. I like it. so, I'll move on to part 2.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/22/2012 2:12:00 PM

I know the feelings well Daver,, so glad i stopped by...)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/22/2012 6:43:00 AM

stopped by to sa g'mornin' and glad I did. You put words to those mixed feelings that I awaken to /with mornings ...only the the last 4 lines kick it in the butt! Nice one Daver and "Good morning!" :D

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/21/2012 9:55:00 AM

Loved the song with the same name Daver and now you bring it all alive. It takes a bold reluctance to face some days and sometimes staying in bed would be a better solution. Love your enthusiasm my friend; it is infectious!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2012 10:52:00 PM

Daver, some times i wake up... and say.."OH! NO not again!" but, the rejuvenating part makes it happen to want... enjoyed... FOREVER P.D.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/19/2012 2:59:00 PM

Very exciting Dave ! Love this write ! Have a good one sir....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2012 5:49:00 PM

I recall the John Travolta movie of that name, or the song's name. Yes, it's time to rejuvenate and not let one's fears hold one back. cool word, Leech!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2012 1:32:00 PM

You surely have a positive outlook on life, Daver. I hope you experience these emotions for many years to come. Love you, Carolyn

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/17/2012 9:37:00 AM

Nice one ....enjoyed !!