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Stayin' In the Globe

Stuck in a Christmas globe... Like a fish in a bowl Looking for ways out... Perhaps, through a pinhole As I look through the glass... With water in my eyes I see the world as it is... And I start to realize Being stuck in this globe... May not be so bad So much hatred outside... Wow, isn't that sad I then think to myself... "Which way should I swim" Thinking what's outside... I think... "I'll stay in" Stuck In A Christmas Globe PC Sponsor: Bobby May 11-20-2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2019 12:30:00 PM

- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your winning poem, Charlie :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/14/2019 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations, Charles Panagiota

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/13/2019 5:01:00 AM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Charles - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/12/2019 11:23:00 PM

Charles congratulations on your placement!;)

Na Na

Date: 12/12/2019 7:07:00 PM

Congrats On your winning poem Charles

Midnight Aurora

Date: 11/21/2019 5:08:00 PM

It can be a cold world indeed...couldn't blame anyone for wanting to stay in away from all that...Nice job!

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2019 2:24:00 PM

yes too cold to go out... i liked what you did here... very clever..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/21/2019 6:57:00 AM

I hear your message Charlie--the third stanza spells the essence of your poem--and the ending spells the sad state of affairs out there in this world. Much depth in this brilliant write--all the best for a win.