Stay Over Forever

Stay over, forever
my unusual love,
stay over, forever 

There’s nothing left here
without your rear love,
but high pitched emptiness

I’ll drill and till harder,
non stop,
till I cultivate you into my immersed care

I will never quit	
nor faint against the current of our love

Stay over, forever
my unusual love,
stay over, forever

and bloom up the fullness of our love
which will overflow the bowl of our gloominess 

this will make our sorrows stomach its envy
and rest in peace

Then we shall solemnly concede,
and become a fountain of love

And finally,
we shall retire heartbreak,
and make it become a retrench shoemaker 
with a logo of shame, titled ‘an ex-heartbreaker’

While I will forever remain yours heart-maker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/15/2012 10:08:00 PM
Joey, i like the way your not afraid to show repeating lines.. It's a random mind who will express their poems with the right flow.. and here i love your poem. I myself like the stand out, of the same sentence and wording being used. Joey forever sounds awesome...keep your heart-happy in any which way you can..love _LINDA
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Femi Joey Oloidi
Date: 8/16/2012 4:08:00 PM
Awww! Linda, thank you so much, I wish I could see you now and read my best poem to you in person. But not to worry, I am cooking up some new nice poem n I will dedicate the best one to you. Thanks...love_kingfemi
Date: 8/14/2012 10:03:00 AM
Femi, I like the metaphors in this romantic write..David
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Date: 8/14/2012 3:21:00 PM
Dav! Dav!thank Boss. The best is yet to come from all of us...work on bro! Kingfemi
Date: 8/14/2012 10:02:00 AM
Great expressive work..I hope that it works out..Sara
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Femi Joey Oloidi
Date: 8/14/2012 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Sara, you all make me better by the day! I'll keep growing better 'poetically' Kingfemi
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