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Stay On the Couch

remote control guns... press finger...change channels... death of the story... post modern eras... fracture the camp fires of oldt... ten seconds per channel... modern aggressions... wedded to electronics... ten seconds a watch...

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2018 1:46:00 PM

There's an ABT Electronics Store not far from me here in Chicago. In the old days, people bought their TVs from ABT. Nowadays, they buy them from ADD!! Season's best, Gershon

Sand Blown
Date: 11/28/2018 4:25:00 PM

electronics is a good thing...but its been wedded to tv style aggression-entertainment...not much of real interest on...boredom...turn the channel...or tv off : /

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/25/2018 6:58:00 PM

I'm afraid I'm a little guilty of the ten second watch, myself!

Sand Blown
Date: 11/25/2018 7:39:00 PM

know what you mean...i turn the tv off a lot now