Sand Blown Poet Haiku

Stay On the Couch

remote control guns...
press finger...change channels...
death of the story...

post modern eras...
fracture the camp fires of oldt...
ten seconds per channel...

modern aggressions...
wedded to electronics...
ten seconds a watch...

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Gershon Wolf November 28, 2018 at 1:46 PM There's an ABT Electronics Store not far from me here in Chicago. In the old days, people bought their TVs from ABT. Nowadays, they buy them from ADD!! Season's best, Gershon Sand Blown November 28, 2018 at 4:25 PM electronics is a good thing...but its been wedded to tv style aggression-entertainment...not much of real interest on...boredom...turn the channel...or tv off : /

Michelle Faulkner November 25, 2018 at 6:58 PM I'm afraid I'm a little guilty of the ten second watch, myself! Sand Blown November 25, 2018 at 7:39 PM know what you mean...i turn the tv off a lot now