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Stay Inside of Your Shell

You’re no good. That is my conclusion. You have caused me nothing but trouble. Just get lost. Crawl back into your shell. The world does not need someone like you. Go away. Stay inside of your shell. Do not come out for any reason. Take your shell. Go to another beach. Stay where you are far out of my reach. Robert Pettit for Nette Onclaud’s Parallelogram de Crystalline contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/9/2012 4:40:00 PM
congrats on your contest win with this very different and original take on the theme :-)
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:32:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your win in Nette's contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:52:00 AM
Cute one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Robert!
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:29:00 PM
a creative shift, robert.. congrats on your win in my contest..:) hugggs!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:25:00 PM
congrats Robert on an exciting win for this electrifying write .. excellent emotion portrayed in every line luv..
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:05:00 PM
I like the style of this, like talking about a person and not a shellfish. GREAT job!
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Date: 2/28/2012 7:42:00 PM
This is a wonderful write than I have read this fine evening! You have written a perfect example of someone that should have never left their shell! I love this glorious write my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:43:00 PM
Turtlewoman......? or crazy folk?
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