Alexandria Fons Poet Free verse

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I'm slipping 
Falling
Forever calling
For help
Watch me as I soar
Deeper and deeper
Into the earth
As it swallows me 
Tighter 
I reach up up up
But all I grab is air
Nothing is there 
Why is nothing there
Don't you see 
Can't you see
Falling and calling
I choke on the words
The words are trapped
As am I
Save me please
Please reach for me
Stretch further you can do it
I'm trying
I'm dying
I'm crying
For you and you and you
No one is there 
I am alone

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Michael E. Harris October 14, 2017 at 7:38 PM Fascinating. This can be interpreted in so many ways. Normal every day life. Sports. Lost in a dream..... Cool. Very Cool. Your imagination set free. On the other hand a sense of drowning. Terrifying horrifying heart pounding with fear. Fascinating.

Arturo Michael September 24, 2017 at 11:17 AM Reach out Alexandra, someone's there...You're never alone...Enjoyed your poem...Have a lovely day Alexandria Fons September 24, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thank you :)

Pailey Gordon September 24, 2017 at 8:57 AM so so sad :( but beautiful wording. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! Keep up the great work :)) Alexandria Fons September 24, 2017 at 3:53 PM Thank you :)

Ovidiu Bocsa September 24, 2017 at 3:46 AM You are not alone because your poetry built up auditory and admirers :Good verses for low mood Prepare better ones for high mood Alexandria Fons September 24, 2017 at 3:53 PM Thank you :)

Jan Allison September 24, 2017 at 3:19 AM such sad lines Alexandria, I think many can relate to these feelings of loneliness especially after a relationship has broken down. It has a lyrical feel to it - great work:-) hugs jan xx Alexandria Fons September 24, 2017 at 3:21 AM Thank you for your kind words