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Stay In Touch

I'm slipping Falling Forever calling For help Watch me as I soar Deeper and deeper Into the earth As it swallows me Tighter I reach up up up But all I grab is air Nothing is there Why is nothing there Don't you see Can't you see Falling and calling I choke on the words The words are trapped As am I Save me please Please reach for me Stretch further you can do it I'm trying I'm dying I'm crying For you and you and you No one is there I am alone

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Michael E. Harris

Date: 10/14/2017 7:38:00 PM

Fascinating. This can be interpreted in so many ways. Normal every day life. Sports. Lost in a dream..... Cool. Very Cool. Your imagination set free. On the other hand a sense of drowning. Terrifying horrifying heart pounding with fear. Fascinating.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/24/2017 11:17:00 AM

Reach out Alexandra, someone's there...You're never alone...Enjoyed your poem...Have a lovely day

Alexandria Fons
Date: 9/24/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you :)

Pailey Gordon

Date: 9/24/2017 8:57:00 AM

so so sad :( but beautiful wording. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! Keep up the great work :))

Alexandria Fons
Date: 9/24/2017 3:53:00 PM

Thank you :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 9/24/2017 3:46:00 AM

You are not alone because your poetry built up auditory and admirers :Good verses for low mood Prepare better ones for high mood

Alexandria Fons
Date: 9/24/2017 3:53:00 PM

Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2017 3:19:00 AM

such sad lines Alexandria, I think many can relate to these feelings of loneliness especially after a relationship has broken down. It has a lyrical feel to it - great work:-) hugs jan xx

Alexandria Fons
Date: 9/24/2017 3:21:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words