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    Retirement’s made up to look rosy
      ‘Look back on a life lived well’
    Pardon me for being so nosy, but
       that's a surefire prescription for hell

    Nothing to do but ‘look back’
       paves the way for a future pitch-black
    Look forward, make plans, stay connected
       Avoid the road to becoming dejected

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Date: 8/10/2024 2:20:00 PM
My belief also. No doubt we can work longer, but don't tell them.
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Date: 8/10/2024 8:11:00 AM
Hi Gershon, well penned sage advice. I look back on glory days of youth, but I also am watching and marveling in my grandchildren's young lives. My former high school cheerleader daughter turns 43 in a few months. Gee, where did the time go? You may feel the same way. I think about the future too. Shabbat Shalom :)
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Date: 8/10/2024 6:05:00 AM
I "re-tired" my truck....they tell me I'll get another 35 to 45 thousand out of them...I've retired twice(legitimately) now I do "freelance" work as PAPA...TA-DA
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Date: 8/9/2024 5:43:00 PM
So true! It's always about the next page, unless there's pictures of course (not the slides!). No, seriously, this is a point well made. The present and the future have a breath of life, especially when engaged with others and creative activities. The chirpy tone shows that you live by your advice. J :)
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