Stay, Baby Mine, Stay

Between the blind slats I see pale light;
birds waken and begin to sing.
Slowly the inky hold of night weakens,
black fingers slipping backwards,
dawn gaining strength, brightness.
You turn and open eyes still sleepy,
your downy head cradled in my arms;
baby sweetness like the fresh morning,
soft dewy skin cloaking infant charms.
The days flow faster
sweeping childhood swiftly past,
clouds of child laughter
raining happiness each day
stay, baby mine, stay with me.
Copyright, August 11, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Congrats on you placement Faye. Well done.
Merryman Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Faye, this is such a sweet write! Fantastic, descriptive images. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 6:34 PM
I love this tender write Faye - made me recall when my son was a little baby:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Faye, congratulations on your win, oh did I wish the same. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Faye, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Sweet tender thoughts so well expressed, congratulations Faye...
Scars Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Faye, wonderful poem....congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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August 22, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Congrats on your 1st place with this wonderful lines. Well done! :) Sunita
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August 21, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Hi Faye, This was such a fine entry. Congratulations on your fine :-)Alexis
Godwin Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:28 PM
I love this Faye! It touches me, especially my maternal buttons. Lovely and truthful, such great lines, splendid job ... CayCay
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