Patricia Leduc Poet Free verse

Stay Awhile

Stay awhile…
Share your smile
It’s been gone so long from your face...
Do I see you now basking in her loving embrace?

I see that sparkling dance in your eyes
Singing of love now and tomorrow
That is the sound track of your life
She is your future and I am your past

You want your love to last?
So please don’t delay 
Run… to her fast
As she will fervently pray

You might still say...
Stay awhile …

Pat LeDuc
January 30, 2018

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Lunita Blanca March 20, 2018 at 4:50 PM A lover is a somnambulist who knows that she is walking in her sleep, but insists on falling downstairs anyhow. Patricia Leduc March 20, 2018 at 5:55 PM That you Carlos..interesting comment :))

Silent One March 20, 2018 at 10:08 AM Kinda bittersweet to me, you ask him to go, but you dont really want him to go, but you think she will give him what he wants... great poetry Patricia.. Patricia Leduc March 20, 2018 at 1:08 PM Love is so confusing! Thank you for you comment :))

Line Gauthier March 17, 2018 at 8:59 AM Sweet and kind poem, Patricia. Patricia Leduc March 17, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thank you !!