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Stay Awhile

Stay awhile… Share your smile It’s been gone so long from your face... Do I see you now basking in her loving embrace? I see that sparkling dance in your eyes Singing of love now and tomorrow That is the sound track of your life She is your future and I am your past You want your love to last? So please don’t delay Run… to her fast As she will fervently pray You might still say... Stay awhile … Pat LeDuc January 30, 2018

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Lunita Blanca

Date: 3/20/2018 4:50:00 PM

A lover is a somnambulist who knows that she is walking in her sleep, but insists on falling downstairs anyhow.

Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/20/2018 5:55:00 PM

That you Carlos..interesting comment :))

Silent One

Date: 3/20/2018 10:08:00 AM

Kinda bittersweet to me, you ask him to go, but you dont really want him to go, but you think she will give him what he wants... great poetry Patricia..

Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/20/2018 1:08:00 PM

Love is so confusing! Thank you for you comment :))

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/17/2018 8:59:00 AM

Sweet and kind poem, Patricia.

Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/17/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thank you !!