Stay Away
All the mean things are said and have been done over the years hurt. The brown eye girl keeps telling him good bye but he won't listen. He calls her unreasonable. They are using the same pattern over and over again. They tell each other how they feel then one of them pushes the other away. The brown eye girl just wants him to stay away.
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