Stay

The voice of my eyes Speaks silent words A language to be heard What does it say? Oh baby, it’s telling you Telling you to stay The voice of my heart Thundering through my chest As your head lies on my breast Oh baby, what does it say? It’s telling you Telling you to stay The voice of my body These words my arms speak As I melt and go weak In the heat of your night In the cool of your day What, oh what does it say? Baby, oh baby It’s begging you, Asking you It’s telling you to stay Stay… Let your doubts stop turning Give in to this burning Forget what’s wrong or right And stay with me tonight Stay just a little longer You’ll leave a little stronger Stay inside my fantasy And feed on my ecstasy Be naked heart and soul Lose control and be made whole Let caged desires free Let wantonness just...BE Oh taste and touch and feel, Every wish in me come real Oh baby, what do you say? Let the world just melt away To your paradise, I'm the way Oh baby...right now...TODAY Just PLEASE ~*~ STAY ~*~ Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/15/2014 7:50:00 AM

I just found this gem my friend. Another off the charts write by you and sure enough I simply have to add this to my fav list! Giving this sweet write SUPER 7 RATING TOO.

Tabitha Mathis

Date: 8/27/2014 6:49:00 AM

I love your poem.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/26/2014 9:47:00 PM

Wow! Eight poems in the top 100! Congratulations Eileen.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/5/2014 6:13:00 PM

beautifully crafted piece eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 2:30:00 AM

Liam...glad to have you visit. It's been a long while. Thanks for the kind words. :) Hope all is well with you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2014 3:58:00 PM

I am favouring this beauty sweet Eileen..Outstanding!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 2:29:00 AM

Such an honor, Charmaine. :) I'm touched. Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/5/2014 2:15:00 PM

This love could end the world, and start a paradise unfurled Eileen. This longing, and these lyrics have my heart steaming! Love the ending too! A FAV. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 2:19:00 PM

:) Thanks for visiting, Justin. I love your takes on my work...Always a kind word for me to lift my spirits. If there were this constancy in love...there would be a paradise indeed. Thanks for faving this. I'm touched.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/5/2014 11:52:00 AM

Another top 7 rating for you, Eileen! Not just for an excellent and passionate write, but also for a reversal in roles. Usually I meet the authoress pleading for assurance...this time she is the reassuring one. [Manassian is very poetic-sounding] // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Great to have you visit and thanks for the high rating. You are very kind. I'm glad you like my maiden name. It is dear to my heart in so many ways. Bless you...

Tim Smith

Date: 8/5/2014 8:33:00 AM

How wonderful and passionate Eileen..... Hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 10:53:00 AM

And it's ALL good!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thanks, Tim....Is there more to life than passion? Passion is more than just sexual fulfillment....There is passion for LIFE...for BEAUTY...and LOVE.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/5/2014 7:57:00 AM

This is most certainly an ooh la la moment. You certainly are wielding passionate pen this morning. I am faving it as well, let's get this one in the too 100!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 10:51:00 AM

That was then....this is now, Richard. I haven't been on that list for FOREVER. At one point...I had six up there. Ah...Never mind. I'll keep writing my little heart out. If you keep reading...and others whom I love...I'm happy!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/5/2014 5:45:00 AM

"The voice of my eyes Speaks silent words- Stay just a little longer You’ll leave a little stronger -Let caged desires free Let wantonness just...BE"- MY GAWD! EILEEN, IN ALL SERIOUSNESS, THIS is the BEST Poem I have read of yours....SOOO many great lines, I can tell you wrote this in the Unconscious state of EXSTACY! WOW WOW WOW! this gets at least a 7 and goes directly to my Favorite list! Can't believe I just read this, I am lit up with amazement over here. You have something great here!

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 8/5/2014 10:35:00 PM

Au contraire mon cheri!~ BUt it is not MY seven attall, it is YOUR SEVEN, which your soulful words have earned, from you, by you!~ JSLambert :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:50:00 AM

Grateful for the seven, JS...and that you faved this piece. Thanks for the kind words.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/5/2014 5:39:00 AM

Hey, I see you changed your name on here to the Manassian Syrup and pancakes!:) WOW! I made a comment about your name somewhere on here and I know I must have butchered the spelling! NOW, I am going to read your poem. Be Back soon:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:49:00 AM

Yes....it's a long story. My Mama believed in my writing abilities. She wanted me to sign my maiden name on anything I write. In honor of her memory, and also to show my Armenian roots...I'm using my maiden name now. If it is like syrup...all the better. Thanks for your effusive praise.