Static.....

The accumulative miles could astonish,
All those tongues, with nary a story uttered.
All those eyes that never "saw" a thing.
All those soles, the antithesis of "only".
All those heels, still attempting to lift in silent dignity.

From a still shot, a dynamic response is invoked!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/15/2010 3:47:00 AM
thanks, gavin..... i'm very proud of it........
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Date: 6/15/2010 3:20:00 AM
A very well crafted free verse, beautiful choice of words! Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 5/23/2010 9:04:00 PM
deep words and expression, you have here Jim, enjoyed,..p.d.
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