Static.....

The accumulative miles could astonish,
All those tongues, with nary a story uttered.
All those eyes that never "saw" a thing.
All those soles, the antithesis of "only".
All those heels, still attempting to lift in silent dignity.

From a still shot, a dynamic response is invoked!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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David Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 3:47 AM
thanks, gavin..... i'm very proud of it........
Pattison Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 3:20 AM
A very well crafted free verse, beautiful choice of words! Regards, Gavin.
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May 23, 2010 at 9:04 PM
deep words and expression, you have here Jim, enjoyed,..p.d.
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