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dream illusions rise and subside though not always, a pleasant ride sleeping state determines response whilst waking, how we look askance our luminous self, veiled inside 17–July-2021

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Date: 7/16/2021 10:24:00 PM
I am not good at iambic tetrameters. I even find rhyming difficult with many constraints.
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