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State of Stupor

dream illusions rise and subside though not always, a pleasant ride sleeping state determines response whilst waking, how we look askance our luminous self, veiled inside 17–July-2021
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July 16, 2021 at 10:24 PM
I am not good at iambic tetrameters. I even find rhyming difficult with many constraints.
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