State of Mind

What made this hole
Stretch beyond far?
You still you are,
Just empty inside.

If not the wind,
Why try to imitate
Blowing mind apart,
Hole stays inside.

If not the fire
Burned you inside,
Why fight with water
What cannot die.

If no thoughts
Can now replace
Things you lost,
So simple to gain.

If you look inside
No holes you'll find
You still you are
With a peaceful mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 17, 2016 at 10:22 AM
You brought this well, Davor. I really like it. LINDA
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February 17, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Thanks :) It was a blurry and tricky one to capture with words in the moment.
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